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Newer page: version 26 Last edited on Saturday, March 15, 2003 1:59:25 pm. by DavidLucifer
Older page: version 25 Last edited on Saturday, March 1, 2003 10:35:03 pm. by JakeSapiens
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 Recognize the following: 
  
 Humans, our current host animal species, share a common ancestry with all biological life on earth. 
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+I have two problems with the phrasing. First "our current host animal species" seems to imply there was a former host animal species. I know you probably didn't mean it that way, but there is no need to invite confusion. Secondly we share a common ancestor, not ancestry, with all biological life. Very different meanings. -- DavidLucifer  
  
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 Proposal 13 by JakeSapiens (wording by DavidLucifer) on 2003.01.29